Alex, I like the choices you have made for these pieces. You have broken down the compositions well. I would like you to be more confident when putting your lines down and developing them. I would also recommend varying the types of primitives - more spherical for the head and hands, maybe. Lastly, try to work bolder lines in the foreground. Line variety will help your compositions and poses.
Alex,
ReplyDeleteI like the choices you have made for these pieces. You have broken down the compositions well. I would like you to be more confident when putting your lines down and developing them.
I would also recommend varying the types of primitives - more spherical for the head and hands, maybe.
Lastly, try to work bolder lines in the foreground. Line variety will help your compositions and poses.