Alex, While all 3 of these poses are a definite improvement in being more conscientious about the choice of a pose, the process is still too fixated on a finished contour line drawing. Please abandon this result. Loosen your line up at first, then work in this direction and show me more underdrawing lines. Lastly, try to bring overlap into the figure more with arms and legs. That being said, these are pretty good. Keep it up.
Alex,
ReplyDeleteWhile all 3 of these poses are a definite improvement in being more conscientious about the choice of a pose, the process is still too fixated on a finished contour line drawing. Please abandon this result. Loosen your line up at first, then work in this direction and show me more underdrawing lines. Lastly, try to bring overlap into the figure more with arms and legs.
That being said, these are pretty good. Keep it up.