Alex, There are some decent attempts at caricature here but I think you should back off of that for the rest of this class and focus on proportions and gesture. You do not have a strong enough command of human proportion to amplify it at your choosing to create caricature that well. Please take the advice I am offering all the students whose forms are struggling and develop the figure lightly and loosely at first, and later adding darker, more definitive marks.
Alex,
ReplyDeleteThere are some decent attempts at caricature here but I think you should back off of that for the rest of this class and focus on proportions and gesture. You do not have a strong enough command of human proportion to amplify it at your choosing to create caricature that well.
Please take the advice I am offering all the students whose forms are struggling and develop the figure lightly and loosely at first, and later adding darker, more definitive marks.