Alex, I like the right hand fox drawing the most. Why? Because you have wrapped the tail underneath the body in opposition to the direction of the body, and there is overlap and a sense of form in the animal. The head has a nice personality and ITS DRAWN AT A 3/4 POINT OF VIEW! Well done. The rest of these have decent parts but on the whole are not nearly as strong. Look to that drawing for the elements that help make up a solid drawing. The penguin has good character but not as strong a form. Lastly, try to use more line variety. Lighter construction lines and darker ones where shadow side of form, weight shift emphasis or limb/form overlap exists.
Alex,
ReplyDeleteI like the right hand fox drawing the most. Why?
Because you have wrapped the tail underneath the body in opposition to the direction of the body, and there is overlap and a sense of form in the animal. The head has a nice personality and ITS DRAWN AT A 3/4 POINT OF VIEW! Well done.
The rest of these have decent parts but on the whole are not nearly as strong. Look to that drawing for the elements that help make up a solid drawing. The penguin has good character but not as strong a form.
Lastly, try to use more line variety. Lighter construction lines and darker ones where shadow side of form, weight shift emphasis or limb/form overlap exists.