I like these, the sleeping bear with the z's is cute, but honestly your sketch tells us enough that the bear is sleeping so we really don't need the z's. Some of your sketches are light, just be more confident!
Alex, Overall, decent poses and recognizable animals. I would still like to see in your process construction lines under these finished marks. The contour is definitely important - but your proportions and forms will be stronger if you are building the forms as you develop the drawing. What seem as flat shapes will take on the illusion of depth more. I agree with Jordan - captions and thought bubbles are for cartoonists. The pose should be enough to describe the motivation.
I like these, the sleeping bear with the z's is cute, but honestly your sketch tells us enough that the bear is sleeping so we really don't need the z's. Some of your sketches are light, just be more confident!
ReplyDeleteAlex,
ReplyDeleteOverall, decent poses and recognizable animals. I would still like to see in your process construction lines under these finished marks. The contour is definitely important - but your proportions and forms will be stronger if you are building the forms as you develop the drawing. What seem as flat shapes will take on the illusion of depth more.
I agree with Jordan - captions and thought bubbles are for cartoonists. The pose should be enough to describe the motivation.